I wish I had time to colour this one – I think it would work a lot better if I did.
Everything got a little bit small again when I shrunk my frames. I had some trouble making it clear what was going on in the third frame. It was quite a novelty having to illustrate two eggs looking embarrassed because they have been caught making out.
Tags: Claire Robertson
Comic Artist Rehab 
November 23, 2007 at 10:17 pm |
i love it! the crisp red on white, and then the soft pink blush. also i am relieved that clover’s taste lie towards green day, rather than pussycat dolls. rock on, clover!
i wonder if the escalation from internet to punk rock to playstation *and then* making out would have made it more obvious…
November 23, 2007 at 11:42 pm |
Yes — you’re probably right! If I had sat with this idea for a few days (rather than whipping it up at the last minute last night) I think i would have come to that conclusion myself…. hmmm… maybe I’ll redo it.
November 26, 2007 at 6:26 pm |
Seriously been loving the story and art. Your style is so splendidly simple and elegant. Something my heavy hand cannot duplicate easily.
November 27, 2007 at 7:03 pm |
love it! And I didn’t need help with the third panel at all.
November 29, 2007 at 1:13 am |
[…] liked the story on day 24 although if I was going to do it again I would *definitely* swap panel three and four around […]